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Readers usually take for granted what they know and are
able to predict about characters, settings, events, story
shapes, etc. in works of fiction. We frequently say when
criticizing a fictional work that a movie, novel, or short
story is too "predictable." What we imply by
this sort of statement is that we recognize, for example,
a certain plot device or character type in the story or
movie with which we are familiar. That familiarity allows
us to create expectations or predictions about what happens
next in the story or how a character will act. If a story
or movie follows our predictions, it gives us a diminished
degree of pleasure, because it seems unoriginal and formulaic.
The short-short genre, however, thrives on taking that
same familiar (and sometimes formulaic) material and exploiting
it to create effective fictions. The reader's sense of
the familiar becomes an integral component in the art
of composition.
Applying Hemingway's theory of omission, we can say that,
if a reader will find a situation, character, conflict,
etc. in a short-short familiar, then the writer can leave
out a very large amount of information about that situation,
character, or conflict. Charles Baxter says, "In
the abruptly short-short story, familiar material takes
the place of detail. Oh yes, the reader says: a couple
quarreling in a sidewalk restaurant, a nine-year old boy
stealing a Scripto in Woolworth's, a woman crying in the
bathtub. We've seen that before. We know where we are."
(Sudden Fiction 229) There are situations and characters
that we encounter so commonly in both everyday life and
in fiction that they are immediately recognizable. With
even the most briefly described situation, we infer back
story, envision settings and character traits, and predict
future events.
To use one of Baxter's examples, if a fiction mentions
"a couple quarreling in a sidewalk restaurant,"
we quickly assume a number of things. First, we assume
the couple is a man and a woman. We also infer that they're
in a romantic relationship and that their argument relates
to that relationship. When the man raises his voice, we
could very easily imagine the curious glances of people
passing by the sidewalk restaurant. Where is the sidewalk
restaurant? We'd picture a large, bustling city like Paris
or New York. Because our imaginations tend to run wild
when we read, a large amount of information can be implied
by a small amount of text.
In Elizabeth Tallent's "No One's a Mystery,"
for instance, the reader can imply that the narrator and
Jack are having a romantic affair from the first few lines
of text without the fact ever being implicitly stated.
For my eighteenth birthday Jack gave me
a five-year diary with a latch and a little key, light
as a dime. I was sitting beside him scratching at the
lock, which didn't seem to want to work, when he thought
he saw his wife's Cadillac in the distance, coming toward
us. He pushed me down onto the dirty floor of the pickup
and kept one hand on my head
The diary Jack gives the narrator, his wife's approach
on the road, and his reaction to his wife's approach suggest
a wealth of knowledge about the characters and the situation
into which Tallent places them. Jack's marriage implies
that he is much older than the 18 year-old narrator. His
reaction when he sees his wife implies that he's concerned
about being caught with the narrator and suggests that
they are doing something that they wouldn't want his wife
catching them doing--having an affair. As readers, we
do most of this fairly pedestrian interpretation automatically.
Experienced readers go even further and start wondering
what Jack holding the narrator's head to the floor (and
her allowing him to do so) says about the power dynamic
or degree of respect in the relationship. Through repeated
close reading, we continually find new richness and suggestion
in Tallent's language, right down to seemingly trivial
details, the vehicles Jack and his wife respectively drive,
for example. Only after the tenth time looking over "No
One's a Mystery," did this reader notice that Jack
drives a dirty pickup and his wife drives a Cadillac.
This detail could imply a considerable disparity of wealth
between the characters or that the two inhabit live somewhat
different lifestyles.
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